OpenF2F Class Notes 2nd March (Celeste)

Writing exercise

Review

Original

I’m scared because/about the new scooter regulation in Shanghai. I don’t know which one is allowed and which one is not, I’m not sure if I need to change my scooter expending more money for something that I won’t keep it mine when I go back to home.
On the other hand, I really need my scooter. I can’t use subway or bus because I would spend too much time between my “things to do”. I need to arrive at least at 3 or 4 places on time everyday and I don’t have enought time for going by subway or another public transport.
I have a lots of problems everyday to understand all about related to China. Today is the new scooteer’s law, but what about tomorrow? 🙁

 

Edited

I’m scared because of/about the new scooter regulation in Shanghai. I don’t know which ones are allowed and which ones are not, I’m not sure if I need to change my scooter. I don’t want to spend more money for something that I won’t keep when I go back home.
On the other hand, I really need my scooter. I can’t take the subway or bus because I would spend too much time traveling/commuting. I need to go to at least 3 or 4 places and arrive on time everyday and I don’t have enough time for the subway or another public transportation.

I need to arrive on time to at least 3 or 4 places …
I have a lot of problems everyday understanding China. Today it is the new scooter law, but what about tomorrow? 🙁

I’m commuting to your house.

I’m commuting to your house in the morning every day next week.


Original

This weekend I will have lunch in a home’s work collegue of my boyfriend. They will make a special dish from Galicia, like a soup with a lot of things inside tipical from this region of Spain. Then, we will join to a carnival party. The people who organized it are also from Spain but from another region. Is a Cuban party and we have dress code. I don’t know what does it mean, how can I make me a Cuban costume?
However, I really want to go to this party. Mojitos for everyone!

Edited

This weekend I will have lunch at my boyfriend’s colleague’s house . They will make a special dish from Galicia, like a soup with a lot of things inside typical from this region of Spain. Then, we will join a carnival party. The people who organized it are also from Spain but from another region. It is a Cuban themed costume party. I don’t know what it/that/this means, how can I make a Cuban costume for me?
However, I really want to go to this party. Mojitos for everyone!

Grammar

even though = but

even = also

eg. You can even say this…. = You can also say this…