F2F Class Notes April 15th (Ben)
Speaking exercise
Original
Sometimes I suddenly understand something. Now, I think there are two important things what I should to do.
The first is have a good body, so I have to do some exercise and have a good sleep and have a good lifestyle.
The second thing, I have to study and study, because I think this world is so big, I have so much thing
There are so many things I never know, so I should touch it and know them. So I have a plan for myself.
Everyday, I will get up at 6 o’clock and running for an hour. After my job, I go to home and do exercise for an hour. After I exercise I will reading book or do other things to approach myself.
Edited version
Sometimes I suddenly get a new understanding of things. Now, I think there are two important things that I should to do.
The first one is have a good body, so I have to do some exercise, and have a good sleep and have a good lifestyle.
The second thing is that I should never stop studying, because I think this world is so big. There are so many things I have never seen, so I should touch them and get to know them. So I have a plan for myself.
I will get up at 6 o’clock and run for an hour. After work, I will go to home and do exercise for an hour. After that, I will read a book or do other things to improve myself.
stop doing
improve
should to –> should
A and B and C –> A, B and C
I will doing –> I will do
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