F2F Class Notes 4th May (Celeste) [W]

Writing exercise

The labour day my husband and I went to Nanjing to met with my son and my parents.
We went to Nanjing by train, When we got to Nanjing about 10pm and then my father and us to had a night supper. We ate little lobster, it’s a delicious food. The chinese people love it. I heard it’s a injurious insect from Japan but chinese people see insects overflow made an idea to deal with.They doing difference foods with this injurious insect. Actually it’s very tasty. My father didn’t good at eat spicy food,but little lobster he ate too much. We often eat it with beer ,the combination is the sign of the summer.
In the middle of the labour day,We went to the country in Yangzhou because my uncle rebuild his home there. The air of the country is fresh, all over the view are green. when you weak up the birds are standing on the window frame and chirping with each other.It’s very hard for citizen to enjoy the nature . My son and my little nephew are playing with their scooter .They are play together eat together very enjoy.

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This last Labour Day my husband and I went to Nanjing to meet with my son and my parents.
We went to Nanjing by train, we arrived around 10pm and my father took us out to have dinner.

We ate crawfish which was delicious. Chinese people love it.

I heard many years ago Japanese brought these crustaceans to the rivers in China to destroy the environment. But Chinese people saw these “little lobsters” and came up with an idea.

Now cooks are creating different dishes/foods with these crustaceans. Actually these dishes are very tasty. My father doesn’t like eating spicy food, but he ate too much spicy crawfish. We often eat them while drinking beer, the combination is a sign of summer.
In the middle of the Labour Day Weekend, we went to the countryside in Yangzhou because my uncle rebuilt his home there. The air of the countryside is fresh and the views all over are green. When you wake up the birds are standing on the window ledge and chirping with each other. It’s very hard for people who live in a city to enjoy nature because there are so many buildings. My son and my little nephew played with their scooter. They played together, ate together, and really enjoyed each other.


When my uncle rebuilt his house in Yangzhou. He moved two little trees put in the courtyard. Those trees cost 30 thousands RMB. It’s too expensive for plants. My uncle told me if he want to sell it , those trees can be a good trade. If I have 30 thousands RMB I never pay those money for a plant. I will use those money to enjoy a travel with my son and mu husband.
But there is a fact, when I been to my country house. I found many farmers to do plant trees things. They thought the city circle become more and more bigger, people lived in city and they need fresh air to keep far from pulmonary illness.

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When my uncle rebuilt his house in Yangzhou he bought two little trees to put in the courtyard. Those trees cost 30 thousand RMB. I think that is too expensive for trees. My uncle told me if he wants to sell them, those trees can be a good sell. If I have 30 thousand RMB I would never pay this amount of money for a tree. I will use the money to enjoy a vacation/trip with my son and husband.
However, when  I went to my country house, I found many farmers planting flowers, plants and trees. They think the cities are becoming bigger and bigger and people who live in cities need trees to make fresh air to get rid of pollution. 

Pronunciation

train ( trein )

crustaceans (cruh – stay – shins )

environment ( N – vai – er – mint )

courtyard ( k or t – yard )