F2F Class Notes 18th August (Raph)

Original Story:

The next public holidays are on the 15th of September, the Mid-Autumn Festival. It’s only three days so I think it’s a very short time, so I plan to go to somewhere that is nearby Shanghai.But I don’t want to drive a car because of the traffic jam. I want to go to some place where have no more person. I plan to go to Dalian. I went there ten years ago, now I plan to go there again. I like the seafood there and I think that the view of the sea is beautiful than in Shanghai. I want to just relax myself, have some delicious food and visit some place I plan to go there. I plan to buy a ticket to Dalian at that time, but I have to choose a more cheaper one.

Edited Story:
The next public holidays are on the 15th of September, the Mid-Autumn Festival. It’s only three days long, so I planed to go somewhere nearby Shanghai, but I don’t want to drive a car, because of traffic jams. For that reason, I decided I should fly instead. I want to go to a place with no crowds, so I plan to go to Dalian. I went there ten years ago and now I plan to go there again. I like the seafood there and I think that the the sea is much more beautiful than in Shanghai. I want to just relax, have some delicious food and visit some beautiful places. I plan to buy the tickets soon, but I have to find cheaper ones.