F2F Class Notes 18th August (Celeste)

Original
In our previous lesson, I introduced China’s hottest swimmer, to you. There are many girls, not just asian girls, western girls are really crazy about him because he is good looking. When he smiles like sunshining. Furthermore, he is in amazing shape, he is cut, ripped, chiseled. He might not be muscular, but he is lean, slender but still strong. It’s my type. I think his figure is not too much not too little, it’s just right, perfect. He is also fashionable and stylish, he can mix match athletic wear with other type clothing. I just heard some news recently, when he came back to China, in Beijing Airport, there were a lot of fans were waiting for him in the airport. Actually, he didn’t get any medals. The news said, the feminer fans shouldn’t pay great attention to his appearance, instead they should value his performance. There are just a few fans to welcome Sun Yang. They thought the fans are looked the appearance more important than the performance.

Edited
In our previous lesson, I introduced China’s hottest swimmer, ____, to you. There are many girls, not just Asian girls, western girls are really crazy about him because he is good looking. When he smiles it’s like the sun is shining / His smile is like the sun rising in the morning. Furthermore, he is in amazing shape, he is cut, ripped, chiseled. He might not be muscular, but he is lean, slender but still strong. He is my type / His figure is my type. I think his figure is not too much not too little/ is just right, perfect. He is also fashionable and stylish, he can mix match athletic wear with other type clothing. I just heard some news recently, when he came back to China, in the Beijing Airport there were a lot of fans that/who were waiting for him. Actually, he didn’t get any medals. The news said, the female fans shouldn’t pay a lot of /great attention/value to his appearance, instead they should value his performance. There were just a few fans to welcome Sun Yang. The reporters had commented that the fans valued appearance more important than the performance

The reporters had commented that the fans cared more about appearance more than the performance.

The reporters had commented that the fans seemed to care more about….

few faults – few mistakes / errors

I major in – I specialize / I focus on / I’m good at ____ / I’m passionate about _____
eg. I work in marketing and I specialize in the cosmetic industry.

absolute = 100%

show = show on tv / opera / play / musical / comedy / drama