Read the story below. Continue writing the story and bring it to your next class.
Corrections
I spent a good weekend.
Last weekend was good/fun.
My weekend was good/fine.
I had a good/perfect weekend.
It took 10 minutes to there by taxi.
It took 10 minutes to get/arrive there by taxi.
Grammar
Q: What is a perfect weekend to you?
A: Go outside and to visit relatives and play in the park.
A: To me, a perfect weekend is going outside, visiting relatives and playing in the park.
My home is far away from my company so I always get home late in the evening/at night.
Cherry trees are blooming in the spring.
Cherry trees bloom in the spring.
Vocabulary
cousin ( cu – zin ) n. – mother or father’s brother or sister’s child
Pronunciation
visit ***V
school ( skoo – wull )
private ( prI – vit )
walk ( wok )
work ( werk )
Original
I took my baby to visit my relatives with my husband yesterday. They live the same town with us. It took 10 minutes to get there by taxi. My cousin cooked many delicious food and we ate. After lunch, we went to the park to walk. My baby saw many different things and very happy.
Edited
Yesterday, I took my baby and my husband to visit my relatives. They live in the same district as us. It took 10 minutes to get there by taxi. My cousin cooked a lot of delicious dishes/food and we ate. After lunch, we went to the park to walk. My baby saw many different things and was very happy.
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