Email Service Notes (Jesse)
Your Original Email
– Do you know that Jason will get marred in 2 months with that Lily from logistics department?
– No, I donāt. Jason and I broke up 2 months ago and heās gonna get marred in 2 months?
– Yes. Iām sorry, but itās true. I received the wedding invitation right before I left the company tonight. I guess it has been on your desk right now. Would you attend the wedding?
– I need some time to think it over.
– Take your time.
– No, I donāt think Iād like to go, I donāt think so. According to the local culture, pass me the hat, thatās the only thing I can do.
– Sure. I get it, butā¦ā¦honestly you know you had it coming. Jason loved you so much, but you can only see the downsides of him since day one.
– Yes, and I always spent my time on hitting the books and tried to ace tests. To achieve my MBA degree is always my priority. Even though deep down I know days I spent with him were the happiest moments of my life.
– Come on, you told me you didnāt feel the thing for him and heās lack of sense of humor.
– My bad. I was just mean and tried to persuade myself to stay on track of studying hard instead of falling in love with someone at this busy season.
Your Edited Email
– Do you know that Jason will get married in 2 months with that Lily from the logistics department?
– No, I donāt. Jason and I broke up 2 months ago and heās gonna get marred in 2 months?
– Yes. Iām sorry, but itās true. I received the wedding invitation right before I left workĀ tonight. I guess it’s on your desk right now. Would you attend the wedding if you were invited?
– I need some time to think it over.
– Take your time.
– No, I donāt think Iād like to go, I donāt think so. According to the local culture, pass me the hat <— what does this mean?, thatās the only thing I can do.
– Sure. I get it, butā¦ā¦honestly you know you had it coming. Jason loved you so much, but you couldĀ only see his flawsĀ since day one.
– Yes, and I always spent my time hitting the books and tried to ace myĀ tests. To achieve my MBA degree wasĀ always / has always beenĀ my priority. Even though deep down I know the days I spent with him were the happiest moments of my life.
– Come on, you told me you didnāt feel aĀ thing for him and that he lacks a sense of humor.
– My bad. I was just mean and tried to persuade myself to stay on track and studyĀ hard instead of falling in love with someone duringĀ this busy time / period.
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