VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

Dear Boss
About designing a shelf to show our country’s sink strainer. I had talked with the manager of sink department, and the next is the result of our discussion. I hope you know this and I’m glad to listen your professional advice.

1. The shelf will put on the wall which close the sink area. The wall’s height is 2.4 meters.
2. The material of this shelf will made of acrylic.
3. I will need the detail dimension of the sink strainer to began this design, and the manager said she will provide this.

After I receive the sink strainer, I will begin to do the design work. I had told the manager if the design can be pass. I will let the supplier to make sample, and she said she will pay the fee of the sample.

Dear Boss
About designing a shelf to display our country’s sink strainers. I talked with the manager of the sink department, and following is the result of our discussion. I want you to know this and I would be glad to listen to your professional advice.

1. The shelf will be put on the wall which is close to the sink area. The wall’s height is 2.4 meters.
2. The material of this shelf will be made of acrylic.
3. I will need the detailed dimensions of the sink strainer to begin this design, and the manager said she will provide this.

After I receive the sink strainer, I will begin to do the design work. I (have) told the manager if the design can be passed, I will let the supplier to make the sample, and she said she will pay the fee of the sample.

Dear Boss,

This email is in relation to the design of a shelf to display our company’s sink strainers. I have been corresponding / liaising with the manager of the sink department today and we are making progress on this. Please see below for the results. I would be more than happy to hear your professional advice or any thoughts you have.

1. Shelf to be put on wall close to sink area. Wall’s height is 2.4 meters.
2. Material to be acrylic.
3. Detailed dimensions of sink strainer are needed to begin. Manager to provide this.

Upon receiving the sink strainers, which I expect over the coming week, I will begin the design work immediately. I (have) informed the manager that if the design can be passed, I will request the sample from the supplier who has offered to cover the cost of the sample.

Vocabulary

discipline – jiao xun

after doing sth / upon doing sth (once sth has been done)

update him – give him the most recent details

webcam – a camera used for video calls

set – tao can