Email Service Notes 8th November (Celeste)

Original

When I say I am a two-year-old child’s mother, most people will ask me: Will you give birth to a second child. I know two children growing up togther would be fun and they would not feel alone.But for me, raising a child is tiring and requires responsibilities and patience which I lack of. I.really love children and want to be a sucessful mother that my child can be proud of. When I am devoted to my carrer, I can’t take care of my child very well that makes me feel guilty. So, I say no to give birth to a second child.

Edited

When I tell people I am a mother of a two-year-old /  When I tell people I have a two-year-old daughter, most people will ask me: Will you give birth to/have a second child? I know that two children growing up together would be fun and they would not feel alone. But for me, raising a child is tiring and requires me to be responsible and have patience which I lack. I really love children and want to be a successful mother that my child can be proud of. If I am devoted to my career/ I am devoted to my career so, I can’t take care of my child very well and that makes me feel guilty. So, I answer/reply “no” to giving birth to/having a second child.

Very good, Allison! – Celeste