Email Service Notes 15th August (Eddie)

Original

Yesterday was the 80 years birthday of my supervisor of university. Many of his students went back to Nanjing to celebrate his birthday. I also attended this big party. I haven’t gone back to school for five years since I graduated from school. I am glad to see that my teacher is still as energetic and positive as before even though he is eighty years old. He keeps exercise and reads a lot. He can remember our name clearly and know lots of current big events. He is not only a good teacher but also a great role model. He always teaches us not only the knowledge, he also teaches us how to learn and how to keep forward. Everytime when I think back the days I spent with my teacher, It always gives me warm and strength. Tonight We had dinner together,ate birthday cake, expressed our thanks and best wishes. It was really a happy and inforgetable day.

Edited

Yesterday was my University Supervisor’s 80th birthday. Many of his students went back to Nanjing to celebrate his birthday. I also attended this big party, too. I hadn‘t been back to visit my old school for five years, since I graduated in 20XX. I am glad to see that my teacher is still as energetic and positive as before, even though he is eighty years old. He keeps exercising and reads a lot. He can remember our names clearly and knows lots about current events. He is not only a good teacher but also a great role model. He always teaches us not only the knowledge, he also teaches us how to learn and how to keep moving forward. Every time I think back on the days I spent with my teacher, it always gives me a feeling of warmth and strength. Tonight we all had dinner together, enjoyed some birthday cake, expressed our thanks and best wishes. It was really a happy and unforgettable day.