Email Service 11th August (Jesse)

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A new colleague joined our company this Monday who sits behind me. He is more than forty years old with much white hair. I feel surprised when hearing that he was a physician before. He had a high title and position in the hospital where many people want to reach at. He was admired and respected by many people. However, he made a quick decision to leave the job he has done almost twenty years. He said that he wanted to try something different in life. He think that it is not a perfect life if one only does one thing in the whole life. I am impressed by his courage because not everyone has the gut to give up what he/she earned by hard work to pursue a different life, especially when he or she is not young anymore. Anyway, I will respect his decision and wish his another success in the new chapter.

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A new colleague, who sits behind me, joined our company this Monday. He is more than forty years old and has a lot of white hair. I was really surprised when I heard that he was a physician before. He had a high title and position in a really popular hospital and was admired and respected by many people. However, he made a quick decision to leave the job he has work at for almost twenty years. He said that he wanted to try something different in life. He thinks that it is not a perfect life if one only does one thing for his whole life. I am impressed by his courage because not everyone has the guts to give up what they have earned through hard work to pursue a different life, especially when they are not young anymore. Anyway, I will respect his decision and wish him further success in his/this new chapter.