OpenF2F Class Notes 12th August (Celeste)

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Recently, many people including me are paying close attention to the Rio 2016 Olympics. Sun Yang is an outstanding swimmer who has got many golds in the past Olympic Games. Before the Rio 2016 Olympics, many Chinese predicted that Sun Yang would took home the Gold in the men’s 400m free style race who is the world record holder. But out of expectation, Sun Yang got the Silver in the competition. Mack Horton was a champion who made sarcastic comments on Sun Yang after the competition. Horton said, Sun Yang was an athlete who had tested positive and he didn’t have time or respect for drug cheats. Actually, Sun Yang took the pills to protect his heart and the main of these pills were allowed before 2014.Because of workers’ negligence, Sun Yang didn’t know this situation and was prohibited competing in 3 months. In front of journalists, Sun Yang couldn’t contain himself and cried out for losing the competition. I believe that he has tried his best and I am proud of him.

Olympians – person who is in the Olympics

But out of expectation – But to our surprise / But despite our expectations / In spite of our expectations

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Mack Horton was a champion who made sarcastic comments on Sun Yang after the competition.

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Mack Horton, the swimmer who won the men’s 400m freestyle, made sarcastic comments about Sun Yang after the race.

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Recently, many people including me are paying close attention to the Rio 2016 Olympics. Sun Yang is an outstanding swimmer who has got many golds in the past Olympic Games. Before the Rio 2016 Olympics, many Chinese predicted that Sun Yang would took home the Gold in the men’s 400m free style race who is the world record holder. But out of expectation, Sun Yang got the Silver in the competition. Mack Horton was a champion who made sarcastic comments on Sun Yang after the competition. Horton said, Sun Yang was an athlete who had tested positive and he didn’t have time or respect for drug cheats. Actually, Sun Yang took the pills to protect his heart and the main of these pills were allowed before 2014.Because of workers’ negligence, Sun Yang didn’t know this situation and was prohibited competing in 3 months. In front of journalists, Sun Yang couldn’t contain himself and cried out for losing the competition. I believe that he has tried his best and I am proud of him.

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Recently, many people including me are paying close attention to the Rio 2016 Olympics. Sun Yang is an outstanding swimmer who has got many golds in the past Olympic Games. Before the Rio 2016 Olympics, many Chinese predicted that Sun Yang would took home the Gold in the men’s 400m free style race who is the world record holder. But out of expectation, Sun Yang got the Silver in the competition. Mack Horton was a champion who made sarcastic comments on Sun Yang after the competition. Horton said Sun Yang was an athlete who had tested positive and he didn’t have time or respect for drug cheats. Actually, Sun Yang was taking pills to protect his heart / for his heart condition and the key substance in these pills was allowed before 2014. Due to his staff’s negligence, Sun Yang wasn’t aware of this and was banned from competing for 3 months.