VIP Class Notes (Phoebe)

Make sentences using that, which and who, where (as shown in grammar section). Teacher can talk more about grammar regarding how to connect phrases and sentences as she speaks.

Talk about the topic in next class:

Live to work or live to enjoy? (IELTS topic)

Original:

There are many popular actores and actresses who get great achievements,such as Jackie Chen, Jay Chou(ZhouJieLun), Zhang Ziyi and so on.
However,the actress who I like the most is LiXiaoLu,I know her because of a TV series call 《ChiZiChenLong》,she used to play the Dragon King(The Dragon which in Chinese mythology) ‘s daughter in this TV series.At that time,she was not very famous,but know,as we all know she has been one of the popular actress in China.I like her not only she beautiful but also her good performance and her hardwork.
As a matter of fact,I don’t have any special love actress and I only love their part in TV drama and movies.That’s about all..

I like Dragon Boat Festival very much, because I can eat boiled Zong Zi. It is very delicious. The most important reason is I can rest on this holiday, and meet my old friends to watch the Dragon Boat match. And we also can climb mountains. We can go to maybe Suzhou and Wuxi. On the top of mountain we can breathe the fresh air, and see the great fields.

One of my university classmates is my best friend, and when I was in the university, she was very kind of me. And she always copied my English homework. And for return, she always used her canteen card buy food for me. And she exams not very good, and she always abused by teachers. All other classmate was 欺负her, except me. I think old friends and new friends both important. When I looking for the new job, I can use their relationships to easily find the job. And through old friends, I can acquaintance more new friends. Also I can use more relationships for everything.

With corrections:

There are many popular actores actors and actresses who get have great achievements, such as Jackie Chen, Jay Chou(ZhouJieLun), Ziyi Zhang Ziyi and so on.
However, the actress who I like the most is LiXiaoLu Li, I know her because of a TV series called 《’Chi Zi Chen Long’》, she played the main character used to play the Dragon King (The Dragon which in Chinese mythology) ‘s daughter in this TV series. At that time, she was not very famous, but know now, as we all know she has been one of the most popular actresses in China. I like her not only that she is beautiful but also because of her good performance and her hardwork.
As a matter of fact, I don’t have any many special love actresses I like and I only love the characters they played  their part in TV drama shows and movies. That’s about all.

I like Dragon Boat Festival the best very much, because I can eat boiled Zong Zi. It is very delicious. The most important reason is that I can rest on this holiday, and meet my old friends to watch the Dragon Boat match. And we also can also climb mountains. We can go to maybe Suzhou and Wuxi. On the top of the mountain we can breathe the fresh air, and see the great fields.

One of my university classmates is my best friend, and when I was in the university, she was very kind of to me. And she always copied my English homework. And for in return, she always used her canteen card to buy food for me. And she could not do very well in exams not very good, and she always was abused criticized by teachers. All other classmate were was 欺负 bullying her, except me. I think old friends and new friends are both/equally important. When I looking look for the/a new job, I can use their relationships of old friends to easily find the job. And through old friends, I can acquaintance be acquainted with more new friends. Also I can use more relationships for everything.

Vocabulary

equally adv. 同等地

Doing exercise and eating less food are equally helpful for losing weight.

Grammar

always put blank after comma

that/which/who/where

I remember the song that/which is from Cat.

I remember the lady that/which/who sang on the stage last Friday.

The book mentioned that a great basket ball match.

Pronunciation