Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Write about your trip to the Circle cafe

Focus on these 2 ideas:

SV – subject + verb
conjunctions to connect your ideas

Due to Wilbur didn’t have appetite to eat before , so he hardly to went to sleep. When he sleeplessness, he found that a barn is never perfectly quiet in the darkness, and such as a rat still gnawing his hole. The goose also not went to sleep , because she had to raise her egg.Wilbur hope that the next day comes quickly, he was looking forward to meeting his new friend. When the next day comes, he woke up and started to looking for his new friend, but it was the same as usual and it is nothing special happened. He had to clear his throat and yelled: if you are my friend, please tell me where you are. The other creatures confused and annoyed to him: Please stop your words. Suddenly, a voice which was appear in the last day appeared again ,and that voice was from a spider who is called Charlotte. they introduced with each other, and when Wilbur knew life style which was live by eat bug and the other insects of spider , he felt very dreadfully and he didn’t understand it, but he still feel happy because he made a new friend

Due to the fact that Wilbur didn’t have an appetite to eat before, so he hardly to went to sleep. When he couldn’t sleep, he realised that there was a little noise in the barn, such as a rat still gnawing his hole. The goose also didn’t go to sleep , because she had to sit on / take care of her egg. Wilbur hoped that the next day came / would come quickly, because he was looking forward to meeting his new friend. When the next day came, he woke up and started to look for his new friend, but it was the same as usual and it is nothing special happened. He had to clear his throat and yelled: “if you are my friend, please tell me where you are”. The other creatures were confused and annoyed at him: Please stop talking. Suddenly, a voice which was appeared in the last day appeared again ,and that voice was from a spider who is called Charlotte. They introduced themselves, and when Wilbur learned about the lifestyle of spiders which was lived by eating bugs and the other insects, he felt very dreadfully and he didn’t understand it, but he still feel happy because he made a new friend.

Grammar

WIlbur saw the water which was drunk by Nell
Wilbur learned about the lifestyle which is lived by eating bugs.
Nell lives this lifestyle

lots of things happened = SV
many people sleep = SV

I not went to sleep – I didn’t go to sleep

happiness (n)
he is happiness
he has a lot of happiness in his life

sleeplessness
eg. sleeplessness is a bit problem for people

because it is late, so i am tired

Due to Wilbur not having an appetite before, he couldn’t sleep

because + sentence
because of + noun