VIP Class Notes (JJ)

Vocabulary

matchbox: 火柴盒

blank: 空白

pocketbook: 口袋笔记本

exam: 考试

mark: 成绩

AC: air conditioning 空调

doorbell: 门铃

midterm: 期中考

I draw a day mother and I is go to my friend’s home. My friend’s name is Qian Si Zheng and I built my little pillow and pressed on the doorbell. I going in friend’s home and the little pillow is happy. And I see the friend’s big sister and little pillow became a girl. Little pillow and I put the gift and the sister is happy. Little Pillow and I put the big Cinnamoroll in sister’s hand. It’s night, Little Pillow and I carry the Cinnamoroll and say goodbye. It’s the end of the midterms. Sister have a good mark.

Revised:

I drew the day where mother and I go to my friend’s home. My friend’s name is Qian Si Zheng. I brought my Little Pillow and pressed on the doorbell. I was going to my friend’s home and the Little Pillow was happy. I saw my friend’s big sister and the Little Pillow became a girl! Little Pillow and I gave a gift to my friend’s sister and she was very happy. Little Pillow and I lent big Cinnamoroll to my friend’s sister. It’s nighttime, Little Pillow and I bring the Cinnamoroll and we say goodbye to my friend and her sister. It’s the end of the midterms, my friend’s sister got a good mark.