VIP Class Notes (JJ)

Writing exercise

Write about something that you’ve always dreamed about doing but still haven’t done and why haven’t you.

I want to change the rule and custom of society that everyone can picks up own interest and use the skill to feed himself or herself, even though elder person, poor person and foreigner.

When we step into 21 century, twenty to thirty generation all have batter education then their parents and grandparents, but work opportunities are not catching up the population. We do all have college diploma but our job may not be our favorite one. If the entrance exam system has better design by authority, everyone will choose the correct road he or she dreamed.

In decades, most people around the world believe that capitalism is the pill for poverty, but actually some social experiment in the street and research report shows providing welfare can decrease social problems.

I have not achieved my goal about the thing due to my finance and identity status. I am no any nation princess or heritor of financial magnate. If the major authorities don’t allow or argue to change, no one will take the thing seriously.

In my opinion, Chinese government has to carry out a program to improve the chaos. In reality, Chinese government does have plans to improve, but most officials only care about their achievements and commission from businessmen. That is why we sometimes think Chinese government seems like director and actor.

Revised:

I want to change the rule and custom of society that everyone can work in their field of interest and use their own skills to feed themselves, even for elderly, poor and foreign people.

When we enter the 21st Century, millenials all have better education than their parents and grandparents, but work opportunities cannot keep up the growing population. We do all have college diplomas but our job may not be our favorite one. If the entrance exam system was better designed by the authority, everyone would choose the correct path he or she dreamed of.

In the recent decades, most people around the world believe that capitalism is the solution to poverty, but actually results from social experiments in the real world demonstrate that providing welfare can decrease the number of societal problems.

I have not achieved my goal about the current landscape due to my financial and social status. I am not any nation’s princess or heritor of any financial magnate. If the authorities don’t allow or argue for change, no one will take this seriously.

In my opinion, the Chinese government has to carry out a program to improve the chaos. In reality, the Chinese government does have plans to improve, but most officials only care about their achievements and revenues from businesses. That is why we sometimes think the Chinese government seems like a director and an actor.

Vocabulary

millenial: people born between 1981-1996

Homework

Do some writing and focus on the grammar you learned in class today.

Write about your trip to Hendian, what parts did you like the most and what parts did you not enjoy so much.