VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

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Vocabulary

obtain – get / receive / buy

friends of mine

Grammar

it hasn’t many competition – it wasn’t very competitive at the time 

From the picture above,it is clear that human activities have been exerting significant influence on the development of the island.The whole change on the island is mainly divided into two parts,which are residence and transportation.
Before mankind stepped onto the island,it was only aloof trees that stood on the island.Instead,people now replace those trees with a number of accommodations which is in the array of a circle on the middle line of the island. Restaurants are built in the center to satisfy the needs of people on the island as well.In terms of the transportation,the footpath around dwelling houses and the vehicle track which connect the residence with the pier are developed continusouly.Moreover,the established pier as mentioned above leads to a huge progress compared with the past,where there are several ships travelling to and fro until now.

From the picture above, it is clear that human activities have been exerting significant influence on the development of the island. The whole change on the island is mainly divided into two parts, which are residence and transportation.
Before mankind stepped onto the island, it was only lone trees that stood on the island. Instead, people now replace those trees with a number of accommodations which is in the array of a circle on / along the middle line of the island. Restaurants are built in the center to satisfy the needs of people on the island as well. In terms of the transportation, the footpath around dwellings / houses and the vehicle track which connect the residence with the pier have been developed. Moreover, the established pier as mentioned above signifies huge progress compared with the past, where there are several ships travelling to and fro until now.