VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [S]

When is your birthday?
My birthday is December 26th. My mum and my dad buy a cake give me and my grandmother and grandfather come in my home. I was very happy. I have a brother. His name is dodo.

My birthday is December 26th. My mum and my dad gave me a cake and my grandmother and grandfather came to my home and / so I was very happy. I have a brother who is named dodo.

How’s the weather today?
In the morning it’s very sunny and in the afternoon it’s sunny too. In sunny weather I can went to the bali zoo. I see many animals. The giraffe. And we ride on the elephant in water.

In the morning it was very sunny and in the afternoon it’s sunny too. In sunny weather I can go to the bali zoo to see many animals like giraffes because it’s very fun. I also ate ice cream and we rode on elephants in water.

Have you been to another country? 
Yes I went to Japan. I see 2 people is wedding and I feel it’s not very funny. The great thing is my brother is in the swimming and I push him. It’s very funny.

Yes I went to Japan and I saw 2 people having a wedding but I felt / though it was not very fun. The great thing was my brother was on a swing and I pushed him. It was very fun.

What did you do this morning? 
I ate Chinese bun for breakfast and then I went to SE because I want to study English

I ate Chinese bun for breakfast and then I went to SE because I want to study English <– PERFECT! 

Vocabulary

squirrel – song shu

plane – fei ji – play nn

body – shen ti

eagle – lao ying

hen – mu ji

comic book – man hua shu