VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

Hi Peter,

Hope this email finds you well.

I’ve drafted attached paper for IP protection on X industry based on our research, interviews and more importantly our joint workshop. We’d like to take it as a AB-BCjoint paper to open dialogue with Chinese central government authorities. As you suggested, we could do a follow up event with e-commerce platforms and/or authorities in the coming weeks/months to discuss this emerging topic and joint paper.

You are welcome to amend this paper in track changes mode, and please do let us know your thoughts.

Best regards,
Flora

Hi Peter,

Hope this email finds you well.

(Just following on from the joint workshop we held …..) I’ve drafted the attached paper for IP protection on X industry based on our own research, interviews and more importantly our joint workshop. We’d like to treat / consider it as a AB-BC joint paper (in order) to open dialogue with Chinese central government authorities. As you suggested, we could do / it may be a good idea for us to do / we may want to consider doing / it’s possible that we could do a follow up event with e-commerce platforms and/or authorities in the coming weeks/months to discuss this emerging topic and joint paper.

You are welcome to amend this paper in track changes mode, and please do let us know your thoughts.

Best regards,
Flora

based on my interpretation of his reaction that day I think he would not agree to our proposal

Vocabulary

recently so people find that … – recently people find that… 

rushed / pushed for time

stood me up – sb who didn’t show up to a date / appointment
eg. he stood me up today so I was really annoyed

Pronunciation

provider – “veye

feedback – “eee

china – pr – focus on “eye

then – pronounce the “eh” like “egg”

than – pronounce the “a” like “apple”