VIP Class Notes (George) [W]

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Last week I went to Shandong Province, this was a half business trip and half holiday. First me and other two colleagues went to Jinan to see a showroom, after that we went to Yantai to see another showroom. Because my brother and my mother are in Yantai, after we watched Yantai’s showroom I went to see my family. My colleagues just went back to Shanghai. I had a Friday and a weekend in Yantai which was so good. I also saw my sister-in-law and my niece. My niece was very cute and I like her, and I bought her a bag as a gift. She is just one and half year old and she doesn’t know like or unlike, and her parents put the bag on her bag and she just wore it and didn’t show any emotion. When we took her to the outside, on the way we passed by a stall that sold toys. My niece saw it but she didn’t ask for it. I said to my brother:” when other kids saw the toys maybe the will ask for them.” My brother said because my niece was too young and she didn’t know this, and when she grows up she will know it.

Corrected

Last week I went to Shandong Province, this was a half business trip and half holiday. First two colleagues and I went to Jinan to see a showroom, and after that, we went to Yantai to see another showroom. Because my brother and my mother live in Yantai, after we saw Yantai’s showroom I went to visit my family. My colleagues went back to Shanghai. I spent the weekend in Yantai which was so good. I also saw my sister-in-law and my niece. My niece is very cute and I like her, so I bought her a bag as a gift. She is just one and half  years old and she doesn’t know what she likes or doesn’t like yet. So when her parents put the bag on her,  she just wore it and didn’t show any emotion. When we took her outside, on the way we passed by a stall that sold toys. My niece saw it but she didn’t ask for anything.I told my brother:” when other kids see toys maybe they will ask for them.” My brother said because my niece was too young and she didn’t know this, and when she grows up she will know it.