VIP Class Notes (Dennis)

Write an paper about why someone should come to Shanghai.

Title: Why you should come to Shanghai

Reason 1: Shanghai is a beautiful city

Ex. 1 Shanghai has a lot of tall buildings (Shanghai Tower) 

Ex. 2 The Bund 

Ex. 3 In the nighttime the city lights up 

Reason 2: Shanghai has amazing food

Ex. 1 Shanghais is famous for their dumplings 

Ex. 2 Shanghai is an international city so they have a lot of another country’s foods

Ex. 3 Shanghai is also famous for their noodles 

Reason 3: Shanghai is good for shopping

Ex. 1 Nanjing road (clothes, foods, etc.) 

Ex. 2 Huaihai road (computers, phones, electronics) 

4 paragraphs

Introduction: the beginning of the paper

Reason 1

Reason 2

Reason 3

Conclusion: the end of the paper

Have Jerry talk more. Ask him IELTS practice questions about various topics.

Vocabulary

interact– talk to

At school I like to interact with my classmates. 

milkshake – 奶昔

In n Out has delicious milkshakes. 

confident – 有自信

A lot of people like Jerry because he is a very confident person. 

retire – 退休

People go to San Diego to retire. 

Take good care of yourself – 关心自己

Parents remind their children to take good care of themselves when they are away from home. 

persuade – 说服

How do you persuade your parents to give you money? 

Grammar

argue – 吵架

My brother and I argue a lot about dumb things. 

cuisine – food, type of food

Shanghai is an international city so they have a lot of different cuisines. 

fake – not real

His nike shoes are fake. 

Pronunciation

I like to play Winner Winner Chicken Dinner on my phone. This game is really a good game because I can play with a lot of people. We must be alive in this game. I play this game for 3 months. I can play this game very well. I always play this game in free time with my classmate.

I like to play Winner Winner Chicken Dinner on my phone. This game is really a good game because I can play with a lot of people. We must stay alive in this game. I have been playing this game for 3 months now. I can play this game very well. I always play this game in my free time with my classmates. 

I learned to play guitar 3 years ago. I like to listen pop music because it can make people happy. I think children must not play instrument in school because its hard to play an instrument. It would be difficult to learn an instrument without teacher.

I learned to play guitar 3 years ago. I like to listen to pop music because it can make people happy. I think children shouldn’t learn to play an instrument at school because it’s hard to play an instrument. It would be difficult to learn an instrument without a teacher.