F2F Class Notes 8th December (Jesse)

Write about your day / night and focus on when to use “the”, past tense, connecting ideas with “and” or other grammar words.

Let me introduce my job.
I’m working in Cosmetic Marketing Industry.
I analyze customer’s behavior pattern ‘how they use cosmetics?’,’how many product they use?’ .
And also I research what they want, what is their unmet needs.
Then I make new launching product proposal.
It contains the product’s concept,spec,design, and marketing communication strategy.
The most important part is marketing communications strategy part.
Especially this part includes the method how to make your customer be stoned(addicted) to our new product with an indicate, detailed pitch.
As far as I know , the method is more effective than one way advertise campaign.

Let me introduce my job.
I’m working in the Cosmetics Marketing Industry.
I analyze customer’s behavior patterns ‘how they use cosmetics?’, ‘how many products they use?’ .
And also, I research what they want, and what their unmet needs are.
Then I make new launching product proposals.
It contains the product’s concept, spec, design, and marketing communication strategy.
The most important part is the marketing communications strategy part.
Especially this part includes the method of making our customer addicted to our new product with an intricate, detailed pitch.
As far as I know , this method is more effective than one way advertising campaign.

 
my 2nd homework. (business email)

Dear, Barbara

It was a big pleasure to meet you again.

When I first met your agency in Korea , I was really surprised that Schwan has cosmetics company.
Because when I was in Deutschland I always used the Schwan`s Farbenstift and Füller.
I am a Big Fan of Schwan since I was a child.
Since then I am working toward the goal that I really wanna be schwan`s member.

My Cosmetic brand manager carrer is not long it`s just full 7 year.
But I launched Make up brand ‘VDL’ and I was a senior at LG`s luxury brand ‘O HUI’ in Korea.
6 month ago I took the job offer from JALA. It was a big opportunity for me.
And decided to come here to accumulate my international experience.

I am really interest in your Company Schwan.
So please give me some advice what I should prepare for the future.
Look Forward to your response.

Best regard,

Dear Barbara,

It was a big pleasure to meet you again.

When I first met your agency in Korea , I was really surprised that Schwan has a cosmetics company.
Because when I was in Deutschland I always used the Schwan`s Farbenstift and Füller.

I have been a Big Fan of Schwan since I was a child. Since then I have been working toward the goal that I really want to be an employee of Schwan / I really want to join Schwan / work for Schwan.

My Cosmetic brand manager career has not been a long time since it started. Only 7 years in total. However, I launched the make up brand ‘VDL’ and I was a senior at LG`s luxury brand ‘O HUI’ in Korea. 6 months ago I took a job offer from JALA which was a big opportunity for me and I decided to come here to accumulate my international experience.

I am really interested in your company, Schwan. So it would be really helpful if you could give me some advice about what I should prepare for the future.

Looking Forward to your response.

Best regards,
Nina

Vocabulary

hen jiu bu jian – it’s been a long time since I saw you

i told you a story about my life (subject of story) 

I like tea, (and) coffee, and muffins.

bags under my eyes

most of people / korean people – most Korean people

to make sb do sth
eg. i want to make my customer addicted to our new product.

I don’t know who you are.