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Writing based on: Class 1

Good Morning Smart English Team

Because of my job I have some of friends whom following nonviolence diet which means they don’t eat meat and reject the clothing made by animal’s skin . For their appearance is easy to tell what is Hippy look like .
They have piercing in their ears or nose , dreadlocks ( I was wondering why their scalp won’t feel itch without watching their hair everyday ) .
They often judge people who eat meat to intake nutrition (like cartilage) for thier own good . . there are many food can get good nutrition like ear mushroom that is good for shiny skill and cartilage .
Be more minded is the best way to avoid argument with others .