Review Class (Peter)

Sherry J 6.22.16

Original:

Shanghai Yangtze River Bridge had builded from Sep. 1993 to Jun. 1996 and stared to use on 2000. This Bridge connect Changxing to Chongming Island. The length of bridge is 16.65 Km.It’s a part of Shanghai Yangtze River Tunnel and Bridge. Every time when I was crossing this Bridge. The scenery is extraordinary, the large water extend to the East Sea and some wind turbines on the bank.

Edited:

Shanghai’s Yangtze River Bridge was built from Sep. 1993 to Jun. 1996 and opened in 2000. This Bridge connects Changxing to Chongming Island. The length of the bridge is 16.65 Km. It’s a part of Shanghai’s Yangtze River Tunnel and Bridge system. Every time when I cross this Bridge, I think the scenery is extraordinary. The water under the bridge extends to the East Sea and some wind turbines on the bank of the river.

On [day]
In [month and/or year]

Ex. It opened on Jun 10^th, 2000. It opened in June of 2000. It opened in 2000

Another way to say “The length of the bridge is 16.65 Km.”

The bridge is 16.65 km long.

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