Review Class 4th July (Peter)

Original:

I remember a trip that it happened in three years ago. That trip was a company organized for their employees, I went to this trip as a friend of driver. The tourist destination was SuZhou to visit the SuZhou Garden. The whole trip had finished one day, we started to went at early morning and went back at afternoon, the time on the bus took four or five hours. When we went to Garden and business center of SuZhou that they both are many crowd and similar to JinShan district we lived place. We felt so tried on the return road, the tour guide said ‘ the trivial is a tried thing indeed, this is normal’ . Oh, I see, The bored travel can explained like this.

Edited:

I remember a trip that happened three years ago. That trip was company-organized for its employees, I went on this trip as a friend of the driver. The tourist destination was SuZhou to visit the SuZhou Garden. The whole trip was finished in one day, we started to go in the early morning and went back in the afternoon, the time on the bus took four or five hours. When we went to the Garden and business center of SuZhou, they both were too crowded and similar to JinShan district, the place where we lived. We felt so tired on the way back, the tour guide said “travel is a tiring thing indeed, this is normal.” I don’t think tour guides should say such a thing.