Open+Review 5th November (Selma)

Vocabulary

People who are between 21 and 29 years old – People in their 20s

e.g. I am in my 20s.

Long-term plan – plan for the future

e.g. At that time I didn’t have a long-term plan.

Corrections

I decided to come to China to study. 

I went back to Korea.

After graduating, I had to decide what I will do….

At that time, I was in China….

I decided to come to China again,

The first time I came to China.…

If she hadn’t proposed to me to come work for her, I probably would not be here today.

It has already been 5 years since that happened.

Even when I was young, my parents would let me do what I wanted (by myself).

I think I can make friends easily.

I didn’t have any reason to not want to stay in Korea.

I had a choice between working overseas and staying in Korea.

Pronunciation

Language – lan-gu-ag

Accepted – ah-xep-ted

REVIEW 

Original:

Opinion about china

When i was in universty
in accicent, I had a chance to hav a class about china
That time i studied about history cuture and so on
Specially i was intersted in economic developing
Before 10 years ago,
I remember that time geverment had started to permit to.set up internatinal brand shop as like starbuck,

Edited:

When I was in university, I had an opportunity to take a class about China. I had not planned on taking it, however, i ended up doing so. The class taught us a lot about history, culture, etc. but I was especially interested in learning about economic development. Since that was ten years ago, Chinese government had just permitted international brands to setup their stores, for example, Starbucks.