OpenF2F Class Notes 14th July (Celeste)***

Please review the edited story and also if possible work on helping her eliminate extra and duplicate words in her sentences.  ie:  

1. I can study on the metro but I don’t like study on the metro.  – I can study on the metro but I don’t like to.

Most of children like to play a game of playing house.

Most children like to play house.

We liked playing house.

Boys like playing a game like playing basketball.

Boys like playing basketball.

imagination n.- Children have a good imagination.

They don’t have a lot of limit.

They don’t have a lot of rules.

They have some future. They have a lot of maybe. Maybe they can be scientist, doctor, professor.

They have a lot of things they can do.

Kids/Children can do anything they want.

Kids/Children can be anything they want to be.

They have their whole future ahead of them. (native)

chaos ( K os ) n. / chaotic ( K ot ic ) adj.

The French football fans were chaos.

eg. After the football game, there was a lot of chaos. The French fans were chaotic.

Original

My first cell phone
I remembered my first cell-phone which type was Nokia1110, a cheaper and good useful . I bought it which took 199yuan at about ten yeas ago.It is a non-smart phone that just have some basic functions.It can keep about five days when the battery was full, It is unbelievable in my smart cell-phone now.I still remembered that I lost it in the riding and the phone thrown out from my light pocket. I think If this type cell-phone still have in market. I want to buy it again as my working mobile phone,because the battery can keep longer than smart phone I used. The smart phone can be my information and playing phone.but they stopped production many years.

Edited

My first cell phone
I remember my first cell-phone which was a Nokia1110, it was cheap and very useful. I bought it for 199yuan about ten years ago. It was not a smart phone, it just had some basic functions. When the battery was full, it could last for 5 days. Now, that’s impossible with my smart phone. I still remember that I lost it while riding a bike and my phone fell out from my little pocket. I think If this cellphone was still available to buy, I would buy it again as my work phone, because the battery can last longer than my smart phone.

The smart phone can be my information and playing phone. But they stopped production many years ago. TBC

last / lasting /lasted / will last v. – to go on for some time, to continue

eg. My phone call lasted for 2 hours.