Open + Review 25th October (Tony)
I ate a potato cake.
Chef – I am my family’s chef.
Pistolera – Mexican restaurant in Shanghai
Liquor – very strong alcohol – Vodka, Whiskey, Baijiu, Tequila(mexican)
Original –
Tomorrow I will go to disneyland with my friends. I wish tomorrow is sunny day 。if it rain ,it is so bad. I want to sleep early tonight and get up early tomorrow.
Corrected –
Tomorrow I will go to Disneyland with my friends. I wish tomorrow will be sunny. If it rains, it will be so bad. I wanna sleep early tonight so I can get up early tomorrow.
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