Open F2F Class Notes_26th May (Eddie)

Demo StudentLeona

I write about – I wrote about

to split hairs – to be concerned with details of little or no importance

drive
drove
driven

break
broke
broken

Q: Do you have a driver’s license?
A: I have a plan to learn it in this year. I  don’t, but I’m planning to get it this year.  I do not have a license yet.

…it is not necessary for me to go to work. – … so I wouldn’t have to work ever again

Original

“Mum go to work now, you two stay at home and keep well-behaved!” I closed the door and hoped for the best.

He stared at the door and felt frustrated.

He didn’t understand why mom always liked to see the mutual love between him and the sally dog. The dog was flawed as a pet——she often got too excited and made a fool of herself, once even had a fell short of a bench in the park.

While he noticed the dog was lying on the bed, he got angry and shouted at her. The dog was scared and steered clear of him by jumping off the bed.

“I am the mum’s kid and you are just a pet!” he thought and lay down on the bed, playing a mascara on the bedside table.

……

“What’s wrong with the dull cat?” the dog thought, “I can’t decode his behavior and the best thing he can do is to act cute in his big eyes which always can cover his slip-up!”

Edit:

“Mum has to go to work now, you two stay at home and be nice to each other!” I closed the door.

He stared at the door and felt frustrated.

He didn’t understand why Mum always liked to see the mutual love between him and the silly dog. The dog was flawed as a pet——she often got too excited and made a fool of herself, once she even fell short of landing on a bench in the park.

While he noticed the dog was lying on the bed, he got angry and shouted at her. The dog was scared and steered clear of him by jumping off the bed.

“I am Mum’s kid and you are just a pet!” he thought and lay down on the bed, playing with mascara on the bedside table.

……

“What’s wrong with the dull cat?” the dog thought, “I can’t decode his behavior and the best thing he can do is to act cute and hide behind those big eyes which always can cover his slip-up!”