Open F2F Class Notes November 11th (Ben)

Grammar

From a perspective

I want to talk about this topic, but from a woman’s perspective.

things THAT you need to buy

There are many things that you need to buy on Singles’ Day

Vocabulary

economical = sparing

I am an economical and sparing person.

treat yourself to sthg

On that say, I can treat myself to slightly more expensive things.

Chen treated me to a pair of shoes.

an atmosphere 气氛，氛围

The TV show, the online and offline campaigns created a very special atmosphere

comprehensive 综合，全面

This year, Jack Ma created a very comprehensive experience to boost sales.

Corrections

At a normal time –> In normal times

at this day –> on this day

second –> secondly

Original version

Double 11

Today is not only the single day but also the best special day for Alibaba. There are 8 years history for double 11 festival and crazy consumers have been continued magnificent sales in past 8 years, which proved the results of this big campaigns.

There are lots of different kinds of ways consumers can participate into it. For instance, taking the connection between online and offline and distribute lots ,lots discounts and red packets to promote consumer.

Edited version

Double 11

Today is not only the Singles’ Day but also the most special day for Alibaba. The first Double-11 festival was held 8 years ago and crazy consumers have been contributing to magnificent sales in the past 8 years, which has proved the success of the big campaigns launched by Alibaba.

There are lots of different (kinds of) ways consumers can participate into it. For instance, they can take part in an experience where online and offline worlds are connected, where lots are distributed, discounts, red packets and other incentives are given to push consumers to buy.

Grammar

Clauses 从句

WHERE + a place/event

This is the school where I studied.

An event where you can get gifts.

An experience where many people take part.

This summer, I’m going to go to Italy, where my brother lives.