Open F2F Class Notes December 2nd (Ben)

Vocabulary

hair 不可数

a hair 可数

I have black hair but I also have a few white hairs.


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Original text

Everywhere we all can see advertisements, like when we take subway, we shop in shopping malls, look for something on the apps and websites, when we watch TV, we always can see advertisements.

Edited version

Everywhere, we all can see advertisements, like when we take the subway, when we shop in shopping malls, when we look for something on the apps and websites, when we watch TV, we can always see advertisements.

We all = Everyone (including blind people)

Everywhere I go, I take an umbrella.

Everywhere there is smoke, there is fire. (if you see smoke, that means there is fire somewhere close to you)

Everywhere we can see advertisements, we can also see information about products.

Everywhere, we can see advertisements 我们到处看得到广告

Everywhere we can see advertisements 每个我们看得到广告的地方