Open F2F Class Notes April 26th (Ben)

Demo StudentChen

Original

With the popularization of mobile payment, most of us have experienced paying a bill by mobile. That really simpli– our lives. We don’t need to take wallet anymore.

Moreover, we would no longer have to worry about that our wallet will be stolen. And even if the wallet is stolen, nobody can use our money without passport and we can freeze our account immediately.

However, it takes more risks protecting private position. Hackers can steal our money easily after networks security are weak, and use login unsafe websites.

So network security is most important thing for both financial companies and individuals. Also when we pay a bill through mobile, compared to real money, we don’t feel anything, which will lead us to spend more money on something we don’t need.

In general, I think it’s a big big step forward  and I believe in near future, the real money will disappears and everyone will pay on mobile.

Everything in blue is optional (but sounds better)

Edited version

With the popularization of mobile payment, most of us have now experienced paying a bill by mobile. That has really simplified our lives as we don’t need to take our wallet with us anymore.

Moreover, we would no longer have to worry about our wallet being stolen. And even if it does, nobody can use our money without our password and we can freeze our account immediately.

However, it does presents more risks for our private property. It’s a fact that hackers can steal our money easily if network security is weak or if we inadvertently login on unsafe websites.

So network security is the most important thing (=the keystone) for both financial companies and individuals. Also when we pay a bill through mobile, we don’t feel anything painful compared to fiduciary money (=bank notes), which might lead the most spontaneous ones of us to end up spending more (money) on things we don’t actually need.

In general, I think it’s a great leap forward and I believe in the near future, paper currency might even disappear and everyone will eventually be bound to pay on mobile.

Sticky points:

  1. Tenses

worry about that our wallet will be stolen –> worry about our wallet being stolen

I like him.

I like him (working hard).

I like her (not being stupid).

I like my mom (always being there for me)

I worry about my wallet (being stolen)

to present a risk, to present a threat for