Open F2F Class Notes April 22nd (Ben)
Original
This vacatio I went to Finland. First day in Helsinki. Helsinki it’s nice city. But only four hours in morning. It’s very short time. The weather is cold and now. Helsinki is small city but is beautiful.
The second morning we by train went to KEMI. We lived Aurora Village. That’s very beautiful. Can see Aurora. And also had santa claus village.
In the KEMI we went to santa claus village and skiing snowmobile safari and ice fish. Is very interesting to do.
Edited version
This vacation I went to Finland. I spent the first day in Helsinki. Helsinki is a nice city. But there are only four hours of sunlight in the morning. It’s a very short time. The weather is cold and snowy. Helsinki is a small city but it is beautiful.
The second morning we went to KEMI by train. We lived in Aurora Village. That was very beautiful. We could see auroras. And also there was a Santa Claus village.
In the KEMI we went to Santa Claus village and we went skiing, we drove snowmobiles, we did safaris and we went ice fishing. It was very interesting to do.
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