Open F2F Class Notes _13th June (Harmony)

Yesterday should be my off day but yesterday afternoon I was over work – Yesterday should be my day off, but I had to work overtime for half a day.

Over time: extra work past 40 hrs/ week or past 8 hrs a day.

This article is asked my manager – my manager asked us to write it

Bibliography:  at the end of your writing, you list where all the information came from.  Authors name, article name, website/book name…etc.

Plagiarism:  stealing someone’s work/writing “word for word” (copy and paste).

Drama/dramatic movie:  a movie with lots of emotion/ a detailed storyline.

Original:

My colleagues and I have visit a exhibition which are senior living &caring and assistants with living tools. there are a lot of high technology elder goods, like walking stick with global position system, automatic wheelchair with computer system and so on. I saw some foreign company to show their advanced and systematic expensive to elderly people.

Edited:

My colleagues and I have visited an exhibition which was for senior living & caring and assistant living tools. there are a lot of high tech elderly goods, like walking sticks with global position system, automatic wheelchairs with computer systems and so on. I saw some foreign companies who were showing their advanced and systematic management experience with elderly people.

Goods: things that you sell/are sold.

Elderly goods:  goods for elderly people.