Open F2F Class Notes 9th March (Tony)

Vocabulary

Original –

Self-Introduction
Good morning, dear professors! I am glad to be here for the interview.
I am a brand planner named Caroline and I come from Jiangsu province. I graduated from Nanjing institute of technology with the major of marketing.
During my university time, I had an excellent grad which ranks the top 5% and I was awarded a national encouragement scholarship. In practice, I served as a director of radio station in my university and held two host contests during my tenure.
After graduating from university, I ever worked as a copy writer、account executive、event director in advertising sector. Now I am a brand planner working in a brand

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planning company. Projects that I was responsible for includes Citibank Young Talent Program, launch event of Rolls-Royce in shanghai and national mass producing car performance contest. Both experiences which I worked for advertising and brand planning industry contribute to my ability to balance different kinds of works efficiently at the same time and let me accumulate more practical attainment related to communication, which are supposed to be useful in my study in the postgraduate stage.
I am a person with determination and perseverance. I will do my utmost to overcome the difficulties I might be faced with. I sincerely hope to become a graduate student of Shanghai University to improve my theoretical knowledge connecting to communication systematically.
That’s all. Thank you for your time. I really appreciate it.

Correction –
Good morning professors. I appreciate the opportunity to have this interview.
My name is Caroline and currently I ‘m working as a brand planner at Fovcom, a brand planning solutions company. I graduated from Nanjing institute of technology with a Bachelor’s degree in Marketing.
During university, I had excellent grades which ranked in the top 5th percentile and I was awarded a national encouragement scholarship. For extracurricular activities, I served as the director of the radio station in my university and held two host contests during my tenure.
After graduating from university, I worked as a copywriter、an account executive、an event director in the advertising sector. Now I am a brand planner working in a brand

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planning company. Projects that I was responsible for includes Citibank Young Talent Program, launch event of Rolls-Royce in shanghai and national mass producing car performance contest. Both experiences which I worked for advertising and brand planning industry contribute to my ability to balance different kinds of works efficiently at the same time and let me accumulate more practical attainment related to communication, which are supposed to be useful in my study in the postgraduate stage.
I am a person with determination and perseverance. I will do my utmost to overcome the difficulties I might be faced with. I sincerely hope to become a graduate student of Shanghai University to improve my theoretical knowledge connecting to communication systematically.
That’s all. Thank you for your time. I really appreciate it.