Open F2F Class Notes 8th November (Raph)

Vocabulary

Election (n): 1- the act or process of choosing someone for a public office by voting.
E.g.: The 2016 American presidential election is happening today.

Corrections

Original:

Do you want to have a good-looking GF? Yes?! You maybe change your mind after hearing the following stories. A person, named Jack, is not a typical or traditional handsome guy, and a little bit fat. But good-looking is the only fundamental requirement for his girlfriends. Jack had 3 ex-GF, all are really beautiful, like Anna, or Hongyu, but no one treated their relationships seriously.

The first GF, stayed with Jack because Jack’s apartment is close to her company. After she changed her job, and the new company is far away from Jack’s apartment. Therefore, she left Jack reasonably. The second GF, had a relationship with Jack, because she just wanted to have fun with him. The girl had a plan, stayed in one city for half a year, played through the city, and moved to another city for another half a year. Unfortunately Jack became her half-a-year BF in SH. The third GF, loved Jack’s wallet more than Jack, after Jack spent almost all of his money on her. Jack thought “Hum.. It’s time to take her to see my parentsâ€; but the girl was gone with Jack’s MAC, IPAD and camera.

Jack not only has an ordinary appearance but an ordinary mind. He cried: “What’s wrong for me to have a good-looking GF? I just want my next-generation to have better appearance than mine.†Finally, he gave up and swore that he would never ever want a good-looking GF.

Edited:

Do you want to have a good-looking GF? Yes?! You might change your mind after hearing the following story. Jack was not a typically or traditionally handsome guy, and was actually a little bit fat. But being pretty was the only fundamental requirement for him in a girl. Jack had 3 GFs, and they were all really beautiful, like Anna or Hongyu, but none of them treated their relationships seriously.

His first GF stayed with Jack because his apartment was close to her company. After she got a new job at a company that was far away, she left him, of course! His second GF just wanted to have fun with him. She planned to stay in one city for half a year, have some fun, and move to another city for another half a year. Unfortunately Jack became her Shanghai half-a-year BF. Jack’s third GF loved his wallet more than she loved him. After spending almost all of his money on her, Jack decided it was time to take her to see his parents, but the girl was gone with his Mac, iPad and camera.

Jack not only  has an ordinary appearance, but also an ordinary mind. He lamented: “What’s wrong with wanting to have a good-looking GF? I just want my next-generation to look better than me†Finally, he gave up and swore that he would never ever want a good-looking GF again.