Open F2F Class Notes 4th June (Eddie)

too bad people – too many bad people

rhetorical question = a question we do not expect an answer to, but we communicate something with it.

E.g. What’s wrong with you? Who knows? What can you do? What makes you think you can do that? Who do you think you are? Who needs this hassle?

Original:

Yesterday it was rain and I felt very cold. When I went out for buying on the street, it rained in my body, so I have a cold. Today I went to see the doctor, she let me to drink more water and doing for sleeping. She told me to drink

Edit:

Yesterday it rained and I felt very cold. When I went out shopping on the street, I got wet in the rain / I got caught in the rain /, so I caught a cold. Today I went to see the doctor and she told me to drink more water and try to get more sleep. She told me to drink ginger tea.

Liam’s text:

Original:

It has been raining day lately and I am always on a business trip so that I was not totally status,but today is getting better. So I decide to watch a film which is called X-man:Apocalypse. My one of my colleagues just have watched it and he told me it more interesting than Marvel’s Captain America:Civil Warn .They are both Marvel Comics ,and there are some heros appear both of all.

Edit:

It has been raining lately and I am always on business trips so that I was not totally happy, but today is getting better. So I decided to watch a film called X-Men: Apocalypse. One of my colleagues has just watched it and he told me it was more interesting than Marvel’s Captain America: Civil War. They are both Marvel Comics, and there are some heroes that appear in both of them.