Open F2F Class Notes 28th August (Peter)

Corrections

(Original – corrected)

Not as different as the last month – not too different from last month

You want to take a membership – you want to get a membership

Grammar

We don’t use the plural form of the word “equipment.”

Expressions

The phrase walking distance means that it’s a distance short enough to walk.

Original:

Shanghai is a modern and progressive city. The transportation system has played an important role in our life and we can’t live without it. People go outside by different vehicle. So what’s difference among them?

Taxi is fast and we can use it every time. Compared with rail transit, the price is more expensive. It isn’t the first choice for many people to go work or other places.

Rail transit is very convenient and cheap. We can go many places by it. Every morning and evening, there are lots of people in the each station. Sometimes it’s very crowded. People may miss the line if they wait in a long queue.

Edited:

Shanghai is a modern and progressive city. The transportation system has played an important role in our lives and we can’t live without it. People travel around the city with different vehicles. So what’s the difference among them?

Taxis are fast and we can use them all the time. Compared with the subway, the price is more expensive. It isn’t the first choice for many people to go to work or other places.

The subway is very convenient and cheap. We can go to many places on it. Every morning and evening, there are lots of people in the each station. Sometimes it’s very crowded. If there’s a long queue, people may have to wait for more than one train.