Open F2F Class notes 26th August (Eddie)

to hum = to sing with one’s lips closed

illustration n = a picture, a drawing

to illustrate = to draw, or paint a picture

to illustrate = to give an example which helps explain the message

considerate = thoughtful, caring about others

Original:

Today was a happy day. At this afternoon, my coworker and I drove to a farming in the Westland of Chingming. Driving on the Westland was an enjoying thing, that just a little cars on the street and the trees grow bloom. We picked some grapes and sweet melon by myself. The grapes tasted so sweet.

Edit:

Today was a happy day.  This afternoon, my coworker and I drove to a farm on the eastern tip of Chongming Island. Driving around the island was an enjoyable experience, thanks to the small number of cars on the roads and the trees in bloom. We picked some grapes and sweet melon. They looked and smelled so nice that we couldn’t help ourselves and we ate them in the car on the way back.

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