Open F2F Class Notes 24th February (Tony)

Vocabulary

Rhetorical question – a question that doesn’t really need an answer.

eg: “That was a rhetorical question, of course I know this food is good.”

we were the hardest working and most passionate students in the dance class

Grammar

they came to Shanghai

I met her from the dance class too

Original –

(Question:There are more problems with students’ behavior in many countries. What are the causes and what are your solutions?)

There are various reasons result in problems of students’ behavior. I think the modern lifestyle should be responsible for this problem.

Children’s first teacher definitely should be their parents. because of the city life their parents probably have busy careers, which lead to their children have less caring and their psychological health may be ignored. Which means there are more chances that parents would spoil their children with material ways because of their guilty. In addition, without their parents’ company, children are more likely influenced by the violence on the media. On the other hand, it is not that practical that every individual could get enough attention, so students may suffer from school bully behavior.

There is no doubt that everyone has the responsibility to establish a good social environment. First their parents need to be children’s company and guardian, give them caring and understanding. There could be more activities to be held and to teach students caring each other and how important that cooperation and tolerance is. Also the programs contain violence should be regulated.

It could take a long to

Correction –

(Question:There are more problems with students’ behavior in many countries. What are the causes and what are your solutions?)

There are various reasons which result in students’ behavioral (adj) problems. I think modern lifestyle is responsible for this problem.

A Child’s first teacher should definitely be their parents. Because of the city lifestyle their parents probably have busy careers, which leads to their children having less care and their psychological health may be ignored. Which means there are more chances that parents would spoil their children in material ways because of their guilt. In addition, without their parents’ company, children are more likely to be influenced by violence in the media. On the other hand, it is not that practical that every individual could get enough attention, so students may suffer from school bullying behavior.

There is no doubt that everyone has the responsibility to establish a good social environment. First their parents need to keep their children company, be their guardian, care for and understand them. There could be more activities held to teach students to care for each other and the importance of cooperation and tolerance. Also the programs that contain violence should be regulated.