Open F2F Class Notes 22nd December (Tony)

Corrections

Accounting Company

Why do you speak Chinese so good.

Vocabulary

fine line – a very thin line between two sides of different things

eg: “There is a fine line between love and hate.” “There is a fine line between saying too much and saying too little.”

Q: What did you do at that company?

A: Secretary (Too little) A: I was a secretary at that company (Too much)

A: I was a secretary. (Just Right)

Original –

Today I finished my work at 5:30p.m. There is a junior high school on my way to subway, and they are leaving school when I finished my work. I saw them and started to thinking about my school life. My junior high school life is one of the best memories in my life. I had a lot of perfect classmates and good teachers. We study together, play with each other and help each other. They are goodness and naive. I love them so much and we are good friends now. We will have parties or have dinner when we have time.

Correction –

Today I finished work at 5:30p.m. There is a junior high school on my way to the subway, and they were leaving school when I finished. I saw them and started to think about my school life. My junior high school life was one of the best times in my life. I had a lot of amazing classmates and good teachers. We studied together, played together and helped each other. They were innocent and naive. I love them so much and we are good friends now. We’ll have parties or have dinner when we have time.