Open F2F Class Notes 21st March (Cricket)[W]

Writing exercise

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When I was thinking about what should I write, Judy appeared and then a topic showed up. I can write about hair! She changed her hair style and it’s really cool. She said her head looks so big because of her new hair, but I think the hair makes her face small. I was changed my hair color four times last two weeks and I still don’t satisfied. Maybe it will be different next time you see me.

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When I was thinking about what I should write, Judy appeared and then a topic showed up. I can write about hair! She changed her hair-style and it’s really cool. She said her head looks so big because of her new hair, but I think the hair makes her face small. I  changed my hair color four times in the last two weeks and I’m still not satisfied. Maybe it will be different the next time you see me.