Open F2F Class Notes 16th February (Tony)

key phrases with prepositions:

# percent of

expect to (do something)

better chance of (Doing)

get on track


Original –

(Question: Some people think that robots are important to the development of society. Others,however, believe that they have negative effects on society. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.)

Technology has been highly developed these days, and being the important part of it robots are frequently discussed. Some people tend to believe that robots are important to the development of society, at the time the others have the opposite thought. I think we could get the most out of its benefits whilst try to deal with the negative effects.

Nowadays robots have been widely used to almost every industry, which allow the production and services automatically and effectively. But as a result, some people think of a big cause of unemployment, which can affect society negatively. Somehow I take it a good chance to change our lives or even the whole society. As we know, robots replace the repetitive labor

Correction

(Question: Some people think that robots are important to the development of society. Others,however, believe that they have negative effects on society. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.)

Technology is highly developed these days, and with robots being an important part of it they are frequently discussed. Some people tend to believe that robots are important to the development of society, while at the same time the others have the opposite thought. I think we could get the most out of it while trying to deal with their negative effects.

Nowadays robots are widely used in almost every industry, which allows the production and services to be automatic and effective. But as a result, some people think of it as a big cause of unemployment, which can affect society negatively. Somehow I take it as a good chance to change our lives or even the whole society. As we know, robots replace repetitive labor, so people can do more creative things with their free time.