Open F2F Class Notes 15th July (Harmony)

Storytelling:
Basically I drink two cups of coffee every day, morning and afternoon each one. Yesterday one of my colleages, her girlfriend found a job so he just bought everyone a cup of drinks and I chose american. So this was the third one, and the fouth one was for my exercise. I like to drink a cup of coffee when I work out which made me not be easy to sleep. And my dog just walked around our bed, I don’t know why. She didn’t do that normally but yesterday I don’t know why she just did that. And the dog noisy made me can’t fall to sleep and I don’t know when I slept, maybe 3-4 o’clock and at 6 o’clock my dog waked me up, maybe she wanted to go outside. So I tried to ignore her but at 6:30am I just got up and walked her outside. So this morning I ‘m not very well, so it’s very terrible feeling that you are so tired but you can’t sleep.

Chen Re-write:
Basically I drink two cups of coffee every day, one in the morning and one in the afternoon. Yesterday one of my colleagues girlfriends found a job so he bought everyone a drink to celebrate. I chose an americano, so this was the third one. The fourth one was during my exercise. I like to drink a cup of coffee when I work out, which can keep me excited/awake.

Also, my dog just walked around our bed all night, I don’t know why. She rarely does that, and the noisy dog made it hard for me to fall asleep/prevented me from falling asleep/paired with my 4th cup of coffee kept me awake all night. I don’t know when I fell asleep, maybe 3-4 o’clock, and at 6am my dog woke me up. Maybe she wanted to go outside, I tried to ignore her but at 6:30am I just got up and walked her outside. So this morning I was not very well, it’s a terrible feeling when you are so tired but you can’t sleep.
it’s so terrible feeling – it’s a terrible feeling/ it’s such a terrible feeling/it’s a very terrible feeling/ it’s so terrible when…
it’s so terrible that feeling – that feeling is so terrible
it’s so terrible that there was another bombing in france. / it’s so terrible that you are not feeling well.

wake/woke/waking
eg. I am just waking up.
eg. I just woke up.
eg. I have woken up.
Original:
A terrible feeling

I was like a zombie this morning. I mean, I was awake, but without any awareness, although I had a red bull for myself. Because I drunk four cups of coffee yesterday, which kept me awake till late night.
Basically, I always drink two cups of coffee, one for morning and one for afternoon. But yesterday, one of my colleagues’ girl friend found a new job, so he bought everyone a drink to celebrate , and I chose an Americano. The last one was with my exercise, which was my habit. Those four cups of coffee made me not fall asleep.
In additional, my dog walked around our bed all night and made annoying sounds. I don’t remember when I fell asleep, but my dog woke my up at 6 o’clock. I guessed she wanted to go outside. I was too tired to respond her, and I pretended to sleep and wished her keep silent. But it never works, I know that. Finally, I got up and took her outside to walk. What a terrible night and morning. Besides, it is so messed that you are so tired but you can not fall asleep. This is a lesson tonight me never drink too much coffee in one day.

Edited:

A terrible feeling

I was like a zombie this morning. I mean, I was awake, but without any awareness, although I had a red bull for myself. Because I drank four cups of coffee yesterday, which kept me awake till late night.
Basically, I always drink two cups of coffee, one for morning and one for afternoon. But yesterday, one of my colleagues’ girlfriend found a new job, so he bought everyone a drink to celebrate , and I chose an Americano. The last one was with my exercise, which is my habit. Those four cups of coffee made me not fall asleep/kept me awake all night.
In addition/ additionally, my dog walked around our bed all night and made annoying sounds. I don’t remember when I fell asleep, but my dog woke me up at 6 o’clock. I guessed she wanted to go outside. I was too tired to respond to her, and I pretended to sleep and wished she would keep silent. But it never works, I know that. Finally, I got up and took her outside to walk. What a terrible night and morning. Besides, it is so messed that you are so tired but you cannot fall asleep. This lesson taught me to never drink too much coffee in one day.