Open F2F Class notes 12th September (Eddie)

Demo StudentAllison

eat cake and drink juice and talk.

ate cake and drank juice and talk.

ate cake and drank juice and talked.

We ate cake and drank juice and talked.

Well, we ate cake and drank juice and talked.

Oh well, you know, we ate cake and drank juice and talked.

to shoot the breeze = to talk about things in general

to chew the fat = same as above

a compliment = a positive or praising comment about something or someone

to pay a compliment = to say something nice about something or someone

reasonably priced = the prices are reasonable

half an hour

there is =

there are =

ratio = 比率

Original:

Last Saturday, I and Angela went to Lost Bakery which is located in JUlu road. This bakery is decorated with carved chairs, wooden warehouse doors, green plants and transparent glass windows. Its elegant French decorations are accompanied with typical French tasty food. Bread and cakes are displayed in the drawers; kinds of coffee and juice are made instantly to ensure good taste. I ever made a cake based on one website’s recipe. Unfortunately, even my dog just smelled and refused to eat this failed cake.
This afternoon, I was typing in the boring office and memorizing that beautiful place. Then I sighed for the hard workdays and was eager to have a holiday.

Edit:

Last Saturday, Angela and I went to (the) newly-opened Lost Bakery on Julu Road. It’s a very cozy place with carved chairs, wooden warehouse doors, green plants and transparent glass windows. Its elegant French decorations create the perfect backdrop for the typical French tasty food served here. Bread and cakes are displayed in the drawers; 22 mouth-watering varieties of coffee and juice are made to order. It made such an impression on me that I even made a cake based on one of the recipes on their website. / I, too have tried baking before but even my dog wouldn’t touch the pathetic result of my labor.

This afternoon, I was typing in my boring office and daydreaming about that beautiful place. Then I sighed and went back to yearning for some time off.