Open and Review 5th March (Cricket)

Grammar

I did it before in my ex company- I have done it before with my previous company.

This month I will go there. This month I will travel to Changsha.

Too many travels– I have to travel too much and it gets/becomes tiring.

One time a month. Once a month.

If you have a lot of money you can have your own company.

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I went to my ex-leader’s home to celebrate her son’s birthday last night, it’s so happy.
I’m so excited to hug him, he’s a little fat .soft skin .big eyes and so on. He is really handsome boy .
We had a ten people to celebrate his birthday, almost i knew who they r , except two beautiful girls i never seen them before. My ex-leader introduced them for me, they were her classmates when they were studying in university .
We ate hot-pot and drunk red wine .
We ate cake and taken pictures to celebrate birthday when we finished the dinner.
We left her apartment on 21:00 o’clock, coz the baby have to sleep early, we don’t want let him unhappy. It’s already 23:30 o’clock when i arrived home.
It’s really too tried.

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Last night, I went to my old boss’s home to celebrate her son’s birthday. I had a really fun time.
I was so excited to hug him.  Her son is a little bit fat and has soft skin and big eyes. He is a really handsome boy .
They had  ten people over to celebrate his birthday. I  knew almost everyone there except for two beautiful girls. My old boss introduced them for me, they were her classmates when they were studying in university .
We ate hot-pot and drank red wine .
We ate cake and took pictures to celebrate the birthday then we finished dinner.
We left her apartment at 21:00 o’clock, because the baby had to go to sleep early. I was really tired when I arrived home at 23:30.