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Wibur, who is a runt pig, when he caught by Lurvy back to his hog house, he had a plan which is a beautiful to go out on the next day . For example, he planned to have breakfast such as doughnut or some wheat bread in the morning , after that he planned to talk with his friend, rat and so on, but when the next day was coming , his mood became blue, because the next day was rainy and wet, and it totally broke his plan. he did’t know how to spent this day. He wanted to play with the other animals, but they used different reasons to rejected him, and his mood became repression. He felt loneliness so that he did’t have mood to have food. Lurvy felt very confused so he came to Fern’s house and asked Fern’s father what should he did. when darkness was coming, came a small voice he had never heard before which was a surprise for him : Do you want a friend?

Wibur, who is a runt pig, was caught by Lurvy who brought him back to his hog house. Wilbur had a plan, which was a beautiful one, to go out on the next day . For example, he planned to have breakfast such as doughnut or some wheat bread in the morning , after that he planned to talk with his friend, (who is a) rat, and so on, but when the next day came / but the next morning, his mood became blue, because the next day was rainy and wet, and it totally broke his plan. he didn’t know how to spend this day. He wanted to play with the other animals, but they used different reasons to rejected him, and he became depressed / he fell into a depression. He felt a lot of loneliness / He was very lonely so that he didn’t have the mood to have food / to eat / he didn’t have an appetite. Lurvy felt very confused so he came to Fern’s house and asked Fern’s father what should he do. When darkness was coming / As the sun was setting / As night was falling, there came a small voice he had never heard before which was a surprise for him : Do you want a friend?

Grammar

I’m happy
Happiness is great! = being happy is great

I’m lonely
Loneliness is bad! = being lonely is bad

Nell, who is my student, is funny.
My pen, which is black, is big 

on tomorrow – tomorrow
on the next day – the next day

to did – to do