Online Class Notes (Jesse)

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I watched a drama that named MouseTrap this Friday evening. It is a reasoning works which is about a murder case have happened on London pigeon street in the afternoon with blast and snow, in 1948’s winter and then the murderer act as hotel guest escaped to Monks Well hotel then tell us about something happened in that hotel . i think this drama is really wonderful, because the key point is that the twist at the end of drama which is surprised me .

I watched a movie which is named the China survivor on Titanic this Saturday afternoon. it is a documentary film. i like this movie because i am interested in Titanic and i want to recognize everything about it . I wish that i would drive into the ocean to look at that Titanic traces in the future when i was young, but in fact that i think it is impossible.When this movie finished, i had a lot of feeling about it. I think those survivor was really great especially FangRongShan who was one of the survivors in that accident , and of course including the Chinese who were born in that times. they all great

I watched a documentary movie, which / that is named / called / a movie called “the China survivor on Titanic”, this Saturday afternoon. I like this movie because i am interested in Titanic and i want to learn / know everything about it . I wished that i could drive into the ocean to look at that Titanic traces in the future when i was young, but in fact, it was impossible for normal people. When this movie ended, i had a lot of thoughts about it / the movie gave me a lot of ideas and feelings. I think those survivors were really strong / tough / resiliant especially FangRongShan who was one of the survivors in that accident , and of course including all Chinese people who were born in those times.

Grammar

I hope I go to Japan
I hope I will do this
I wish I could go to Japan
I wish you would do your homework

will / would
can / could

if I was rich I would buy a house = will
if I was rich I could buy a house = can

I went to see a play / I went to see a drama

This Saturday, I watched a film which was a documentary named “the Chinese titanic survivor”

I hope that in the future I will do something that is impossible

I hope that now I have the ability to do something in the future 

100% – you know them very well
50% – very familiar with them
25% – familiar with them
10% – you’ve heard about them
recognise them 
5% – you’ve heard of them