Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Writing exercise

Yesterday I read a piece of news on the internet:in Japan, an investigation found that if you mix models with college students, and go for an interview together, as a result, all the models were accepted. And in the “Q&A†parts, under the same question,if the models answered “ I don’t know“ it would be seen as a honest response. But if the answer of “ I don’t know†came from normal students, the interviewer would think why the guys didn’t know anything. From the investigation, we found that lots of people like to judge someone by outward appearance. We all know that’s unfair, however,unfortunately, such kind of things happen every day. We are always shouting about fairness, but judging from this, it seems that fairness is far away from us. How can we change it from our daily life,we must think about it seriously.

Yesterday I read a piece of news on the internet:in Japan, an investigation found that if you mix models with college students, and go for an interview together, as a result, all the models would be accepted. And in the “Q&A†parts, under the same question,if the models answered “ I don’t know“ it would be seen as a honest response. But if the answer of “ I don’t know†came from normal students, the interviewer would think why don’t they know anything? From the investigation, we found that lots of people like to judge someone by their outward appearance. We all know that’s unfair, however,unfortunately, such kind of  / these kind of things happen every day. We are always shouting about fairness, but judging from this, it seems that fairness is far away from us. How can we change it in our daily lives? We must think about it seriously.

Vocabulary

“you can’t judge a book by its cover” – you shouldn’t judge things and people by their outward appearance

basically he must be clean at least he must be clean 

basically – use this to help summarize what you want to say

we have topics when we meetthere are topics we can talk about / we have things in common

Grammar

focus on it very concentratefocus very hard on it / i concentrate very hard on it 

i will consider if he’s a passionate people – i will consider if he’s a passionate person 

if you lack of the passionateif you lack passion

if we talk about with the stylist if we talk with a stylist

you must take care your face – you must take care of your face

if we can well communicate – if we can communicate well / if we can have a good communication

when you have the hard working – when you work hardÂ