Online Class Notes (Jesse) [30]

Homework

Do some writing and check all of the nouns to make sure you’re telling me which one you’re talking about (the / a?) and how many do you mean? (this / these / +s)

Vocabulary

finish my work = you completed the work you were doing
finish work = xia ban / hui jia

Grammar

I raise many ideas
Many ideas arise when I’m having a shower

nouns – which one? (the / a) 

I have a cup – just 1 cup, who cares which one?
I have the cup – just 1 cup, and we should both know which one I mean

Pronunciation

pro – “proe”

Writing exercise

Secondly, we employ lots of experienced staff who are last century worker, not only lack sense of internet or ecommerce, but also just understand distributor management instead of channel management, and they occupy a big budget of salary, I mean they are our senior employees of management. We need to recruit some fresh blood to increase our team ability.
Finally, as a crucial part of keys, is our product. Due to design from global, we could not adapt to aggressive and strong competitive environment in China. The local competitors invent lots of high attractive products, which are not only have many pioneer features but also lower price than us. This strategies make them very successful in China, especially all of the consume ability is downing to cost-effective trend.
So, to sum up, I believe we need to make a internal revolution to win the future.

Secondly, we employ lots of experienced staff who are workers from the last generation (50+), and not only lack a sense of the internet or ecommerce, but also just understand distributor management instead of channel management, and they occupy a big part of the salary budget, and by that I mean they are our upper management. We need to recruit some fresh blood / fresh talent / young talent to increase our team ability.
Finally, the key problem is our product. Due to the design from global, we could not adapt to the aggressive and strong competitive environment in China. The local competitors invent lots of highly / very attractive products, which are not only have many pioneering features but also lower prices than us. These strategies make them very successful in China, especially all of the consume ability is decreasing to cost-effective trend.
So, to sum up, I believe we need to make a internal revolution to win the future.